an attempt at a masculine birthday card

It's a challenge to make masculine cards when most of my papers are girly-girly. Here's an attempt--was it successful? I couldn't resist putting in the cake(/pudding?) sticker though.

Patterned paper and metallic brad is from AAS. Handmade sticker is also from AAS, given by Yen (!). Brown cardstock and circle embellishment is from an unbranded pack that I got from National...? Sentiment is cut out from a DCWV page.

This is entered for 365 Cards' Super Sketchy Sunday challenge for Sept 4. Here is the original sketch.